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When I first requested Something Strange and Deadly, I wasn't exactly sure what to expect. Zombies aren't normally my thing, but there was something about the summary that piqued my interest. For me, the big draw was the promise of a mystery - a missing brother - set against the historic backdrop of the 1876 Centennial Exposition, or Philadelphia World's Fair. Once I started reading, it was the creepy atmosphere that kept me quickly turning pages (or clicking the arrow on my Kindle), even though I was fairly certain I had some of the plot figured out well beforehand. It didn't hurt that the main character, Miss Eleanor Fitt, was an absolutely feisty heroine. Between her and the setting, I found this book very difficult to put down.
The book starts off with a bang - or rather, a clang - when the Dead alarms go off, and Eleanor comes face-to-face with a member of the Dead (i.e. zombies), who happens to be delivering a letter from her brother, Elijah. Eleanor is convinced that Elijah is being held against his will by the Necromancer, and contacts the Spirit-Hunters for help. Through a bit of start and stopping, she finally convinces them to assist her in finding her brother. It was at this point that the book really took off, because the danger of the Dead, not to mention the bits of intrigue surrounding her father's death that are being dropped piece by piece into the story, really drive the stakes up.
Throughout the ensuing run-ins with the Dead, we really get to see Eleanor become a very strong, capable woman who gets sick of always doing what society deems proper, and finally doing what she feels is right. This includes confronting her suitor, the dashing and very rich Clarence Wilcox, about his odd behavior, and cutting out on a date with said suitor to cross-dress and help the Spirit-Hunters with a task. Add to that the slow-burning romance between Eleanor and Daniel, one of the Spirit-Hunters with his own painful backstory, and I was completely taken in by the story.
While I figured out much of the mystery early on, it didn't end up mattering because I found Eleanor's character to be so well-written and developed, and couldn't help cheering her on. And there was enough twist at the end to make sure I hadn't figured out everything, as well as an achy-breaky ending that left my heart hurting a bit. There's definitely some set-up for the second book, but I was very satisfied with the way things ended here.
All in all, I found Something Strange and Deadly to be a thoroughly engrossing, utterly engaging read, with a fabulous main character and wonderful historical flourishes. Fans of steampunk and zombies will enjoy the atmosphere, while fans of everything else will love Eleanor and the characters that surround her (this has a really first-rate cast of supporting characters), with the one exception of her mother, who is really something else. I'd definitely recommend you check it out.
An e-galley was provided by the publisher via Edelweiss in exchange for an honest review.
First of all, I want to thank M.L. Wooley for providing me with a copy of this book for review. She was nice enough to even ship me a paperback version, after I'd taken several months longer than I'd initially promised to get it read. Many thanks go to her for dealing with my lateness. :)
Honestly, I had a hard time figuring out how to rate this. The overall idea of the book - battle between good and evil and the preparation for the end of the world - was great, and I enjoyed reading about some of the characters. My biggest problem with this book was in the execution of the story. If I were focusing only on the author's intent and the plot of the book, it would be rated extremely high, because I felt like the entire plot was very unique and fresh. But the style the book is written in caused me to set it aside time and again, because it wasn't particularly gripping; I'd pick it up and read a chapter here, a chapter there, etc. The end redeemed it a bit in that regard, because the last hundred or so pages definitely pick up, but the storytelling definitely left a bit to be desired, at least for me.
My issue with the start of this book is that the narrative changes points of view constantly. I had a really hard time following along at the start, and spent much of the time confused, not only about who was telling their story but also in what was going on. I felt like the plot - good versus evil - took a very long time to develop, and I couldn't quite see how all these characters were going to come together. In terms of nitpicky things, there were also several occasions of incorrect tense usage, where it would switch from past to present to future all in the same sentence, and there were lots of typos, including misspellings and punctuation mistakes. I was mostly able to overlook these things, but if issues like this bother you, you may want to give this book a pass.
However, the biggest problem with this story for me is the rather passive storytelling. You hear all the time about "show, don't tell" and that unfortunately was not what happens in Dark Passage. I was always so disappointed when some big occurrence, instead of being shown to the reader, was told to them later in a conversation between two characters. For instance, there is a big showdown between Jen and her ex-husband which results in Jen seeing the angels, but the reader isn't aware of the bit with the angels because it wasn't written out for us; it was told to us when Jen recounts what happened to Ivy. It would have been so much more gripping for the reader to read this themselves instead of hearing about it later. There's also a chapter from Peter's point of view where he basically recounts everything that already happened. The chapter adds nothing new to the story and is basically just rehashing what the reader already knows. And then you have the romance between Jen and Bill, which the reader doesn't get to experience because everything between them happened offscreen and was told to us later. There are all kinds of places where things like this happen in the book, and each time I found myself skimming because it wasn't advancing the story at all. I wish this book could be thoroughly edited, because I think a great editor would cut out all of the unnecessary details and repetitions, which would really help this fabulous idea and plot shine to their fullest extent.
I also was confused about the preparations for the end of the world, because I felt like none of that was even a part of the story until the last fifty pages or so. We have all these descriptions of bunkers and gathering supplies and buying horses, and I'm just not entirely sure how the end of the world has come about. Is it because of the angel vs. demons thing? The mention of the warheads which will destroy the world? Where are these warheads? Who built them and is going to fire them? What role is the government - which is aware of the upcoming apocalypse - playing in this whole thing? I was just really confused about what the heck was going on, and how the two things are connected. More details would have been very much appreciated to better set the reader up for the end of the world. There just wasn't enough description to get me properly invested in what was going on.
All in all, Dark Passage has a unique concept and an interesting overall premise. But the execution of the book and story lines leave so much to be desired that it was a bit of a slog in places to get through. I have seen plenty of five-star reviews for this book, though, so please don't let my review be your deciding factor in whether you read this or not!
A copy of this book was provided by the author in exchange for an honest review.
Confession time: I actually really liked this one. No one was more surprised than I was at that fact, mostly because I’d seen several status updates pointing out various things that I was sure I would have a lot of problems with. And I am going to be upfront when I say that I DID have problems with some things in this book, and I am going to be fairly detailed when I describe these issues. But there was far more that I liked in this book than I didn’t, which is the reasoning behind the ultimate rating that I’ve given it. With that being said, here we go!
I’m going to start with the positives, first. Sweet Evil features a truly fabulous, well-developed, and unique angel/demon mythology. This is a huge, massive kink for me personally, and honestly accounts for much of my delight with this book. Anna is the daughter of a fallen angel – in this case, Belial, the Duke of substance abuse – and a guardian angel. While there have been plenty of books featuring Nephilim, or the off-spring of fallen angels, this was the first that I’ve seen to really branch out and create a very complex world, in which fallen angels live on Earth and have children solely to further their sins. These children are really held down by their demon fathers (all of the demons except one are male), and basically forced to do their father’s “work”. Some of this work – particularly when it came to Kaiden’s role – was downright infuriating and upsetting to read about, but that doesn’t erase the fact that the whole idea of the mythology is – for me – absolutely brilliant. I was truly engrossed in the details of the demons, and what caused their fall from heaven, and especially the little tidbits Higgins included about Lucifer. The whole concept of this book is just truly first-rate.
There is also something absolutely compulsively readable about this book. While I had issues with our main character – and I’ll get to those in a second – and found some of the occurrences in this book just a tad too convenient, I was still completely taken in by the narrative and eagerly turning page after page. For me, any book that is difficult to put down gets an automatic star from me, which is why this has been rated four stars instead of just three. Sweet Evil suffers from some of the same YA tropes that we’ve seen in countless other books – the ridiculously hot bad boy, the naive female MC, something paranormal occurring to thrust them together – but I never really felt like I’d read this book before. This gets major kudos from me, because, seriously, with all the YA I’ve read, it takes a lot to make something feel original and fresh. Sweet Evil was a breathe of fresh air, at least for me, although I can understand why others wouldn’t feel the same. I am also going to admit to a bit of a thing for the forbidden romance trope. Anna and Kaiden should stay as far away from each other as possible, considering the circumstances, but I can’t help but root, root, root that they’ll figure out some way to be together. My feelings toward the main couple also went an awful long way towards the whole readability factor of this book, and was another thing that made me continue to turn those pages.
Now, let me get to some of the things I did NOT like. First of all, Anna is a character who must have lived her first sixteen years under a rock, because this girl is so naive that there were several times I was eye rolling so hard I was sure I’d injure myself. I get it – she’s the daughter of an angel, a “special” child, and Patti, her adoptive mother, wanted to keep her as unspoiled and pure as possible. Fine, whatever. But in today’s world, you need to impart some sort of street smarts in your children, and by not doing that, Patti puts Anna at a distinct disadvantage, not only because she’s also the child of a fallen angel (therefore feeling a pull toward her father’s “sin” of choice), but just because it causes her to make some very stupid mistakes when she’s left on her own among her peers. For someone who wants to keep her daughter safe, she sure didn’t teach her what any sixteen year old girl really needs to know.
And then there is the fact that Anna is so saintly she’s nearly impossible to believe. She doesn’t lie – except for that one time, when she did it on purpose, and then felt terrible about it afterward (seriously, stop it). She doesn’t drink or do drugs – except for that one time, when she made a true error in judgement and had to be rescued. She is the girl who reminds a teacher to collect the homework, who feels horrid at the thought of being at a party with no adult supervision after telling her mother that there would be, etc. The extent of her “goodness” was just so over the top that I had a hard time wrapping my head around the fact that this girl exists. It took me a very long time to warm up to her, especially when she says things like this:
“Of course I feel temptation, but I’m really aware of it, so I can sort of squash most of the urges before they have time to register. Rules are meant to protect us, so I follow them. Something might feel good at the moment, but the consequences are scary.” (page 192)
I mean, really? And then, when thinking about Kaiden’s father (the Duke of Lust, don’t you know), she says something about kicking him in his “prized lust parts”, and I, just … ANNA. “Prized lust parts” is really what comes to mind when you think of the male genitalia? (She likewise has trouble with the word “sex”. I pretty much went *headdesk* at that.) Also, I LOLed when she said her dad looked completely “bad-a”. I’m giggling just typing that.
Then there are the little things like Patti just allowing Kaiden – a boy both her AND Anna have just met – to drive Anna cross-country to California so she can meet her father ALONE. Or not having any visual reaction when Anna’s father teaches Anna how to hold her liquor IN HER LIVING ROOM. And a few other things I’m not going to get super detailed into, but were definitely eye-brow raising for me. And then you had the road trip, which was formulated specifically so that Anna and Kaiden would be forced into each other’s company to further the ensuing romance. Kaiden is loaded and could have EASILY bought plane tickets; it would have been far faster to travel by air, which was sort of the point of the road trip in the first place. For someone on a time crunch, a five-day road trip didn’t really make much sense. And then you had Anna’s father, who I loved, but also felt a bit too lovey-dovey for me. He’s a hardened fallen angel who’s spent the last sixteen years in prison (oh, and he conveniently has a parole hearing coming up!), but when he sees Anna he basically acts like a giant teddy bear. Again, I liked him, but his character just felt a bit too wishy-washy. Is he “bad-a” or not? (Sorry, couldn’t resist.)
Also, as a heads-up, this book includes attempted date rape and a mention of underage sex trafficking. The sex trafficking is one of the things that’s really set some people against this book because of Kaiden’s role in the scenario, and I can get where they’re coming from. While it bothered me – I mean, the whole idea of sex trafficking is just awful – I couldn’t necessarily fault him for what he says and does, because of his character and the whole relationship with his father. If you’ve read the book and know what I’m talking about (I am trying to be as spoiler-free as possible), I would be interested to hear your thoughts on that particular part. Also, PARENTS: There are loads and LOADS of make-out and not-entirely sex scenes throughout this book. Kaiden is the son of the Duke of Lust, and is in the forefront of most of these. Because of this – and the reference to some of the other things I just talked about – I would recommend this book probably to readers 15 and up. Ymmv, of course, but there’s my two cents.
I would be remiss if I didn’t actually mention my feelings on Kaiden, especially since he’s one of the hot button issues of this book. I honestly like him quite a bit. Yes, he can be a jackass, and he’s manipulative with Anna’s feelings (constantly pushing her away and then pulling her closer), but I felt like every single thing he did was completely representative of his upbringing and background. He is a deeply flawed character who is having a hard time figuring out what he should do, and this is shown by his actions throughout the book. He cares for Anna – even though he won’t say it – but is scared about what that means for him because of who he is and who his father is. For me, Kaiden is the most compelling of all the characters in this book, even if he is a bit too “stereotypical YA paranormal male” for some.
And because this review is getting out of hand in terms of length, I am going to stop there. To sum up: Sweet Evil is not without its flaws. The characters are sometimes aggravating and the MC is a bit too saintly for my personal tastes. But the mythology – for me – was enough to balance any of that out. I am definitely looking forward to seeing what’s going to happen next, and what’s in store for Anna and Kaiden. I have a feeling this series might just get epic in the next two installments, and I am eagerly anticipating the ultimate clash between good and evil. If you want something different in terms of angel and demon lore, and said lore is a particularly strong draw for you, I would definitely recommend this book. My advice to you, however, is to go in with lower expectations; I think my doing so is what made this a far more enjoyable read for me than it was for others.
Transcendence was an interesting look at reincarnation, and what would happen if you could remember all of your previous lifetimes. Cole is a child prodigy cellist, who, while on vacation with her sister and father in London, starts experiencing ridiculously real visions of things that happened in the past. During one of these visions, she meets Griffon, a boy who she seems to have a startling connection to, considering that they've never met. Once back in the States, Cole realizes that Griffon actually lives near her, and the two begin dating. It's at this point that Griffon reveals why they seem drawn to each other: they're both Akhet, meaning they can remember their previous lives, and work towards righting the wrongs and fixing the world. But one of Cole's previous lives is threatening her current one, and Cole must remember what happened in order to keep herself safe.
I found this book to be enjoyable; it is a solid, 3-star book, nothing more, nothing less. There were moments when I was fed up with Cole and her thought process, because the choices she was making seemed a tad far-fetched, and I admit to being a little annoyed by the insta-love as well, even though it happens because Griffon and Cole are both Akhet. I get that, and was willing to look past it for the most part, but wish that there had been a bit more buildup. I also couldn't stand Cole's mother, who is the epitome of the stage mom characterization. She doesn't permit Cole to do anything that would interfere with her practice, and you can tell that, while Cole enjoys playing the cello, her mother enjoys the fact that her daughter is a child prodigy. After an injury makes playing the cello impossible for at least a little while, her mother refuses to accept this and, instead of being happy that her daughter survived, can only gripe at the doctor about the fact that she can't play, constantly reminding him that Cole is spectacular at the cello, as if her being good makes a difference. Seriously, I didn't like the mother AT ALL.
I haven't read too many books dealing with reincarnation, so for me this was a refreshing change from the current onslaught of other paranormal titles. I especially enjoyed the flashbacks into Cole's previous lives, and liked watching her try to figure out how everything fit together. The flashbacks were woven seamlessly into the narrative, so they were never disorienting or confusing. I also loved the richness of the description used when describing the time periods; everything from the description of the place they were, to the fabrics they were wearing, to the temperature or smells was spot-on. Omololu really has a knack for writing her settings. The flashbacks were some of my favorite parts of this book.
I was tempted to bump this up a half star, but the truth is that this book, while having an interesting idea and well-written characters, didn't wow or amaze me. This probably had more to do with my feelings toward Cole's actions late in the book than anything else; it sort of made the book end on a down note for me, mostly because my annoyance level kept going up and up as the book progressed. I just felt like she did a complete 180 in terms of what she thought and felt, and it really had me scratching my head at some of the leaps in logic she was making. I also had figured out the twist regarding the villain way before it came to be in the book, and while sometimes I like having guessed the truth, this time I just felt like the hints and clues dropped by the author were a bit too heavy-handed. Plus, there is a pretty big clue regarding one of her other previous lives that comes up right at the end, and seemed inserted simply because the author wanted to set up the next book. I felt like, at that point, that putting that in sort of disrupted the narrative and the flow, and would have been better left out all together. In fact, I kind of wish this was just a standalone book, because there are so few of those being released today, and this one was tied up nicely enough - aside from that scene - that it could have been over and done with in one installment. But alas, everything seems to be series these days!
Transcendence is a well-written, fun read that uses an interesting and new idea. The main characters are fully fleshed out and developed, and there is a smattering of humor throughout. If you're looking for something a bit different, give this one a read. I think almost everyone would be able to find something they like about it.
An e-galley was provided by the publisher via NetGalley in exchange for an honest review.